Wow! I liked this game and I also liked Izzar's sexy look! <3 (He might as well wear this sexy outfit for the rest of the game! Pleeease!!)
But I also liked the girls! Mainly Rica and Stevi who showed to have a good friendship!
The ero scene with Stevi was hot! <3
From your patreon page, I assume the game is going to be 100% straight for both sides, right? Like, Izzar won't fuck any guys and neither will girls have sex with each other...
I liked this game and I will definitely wait for the next update!
I have a suggestion since you want to do kingdom building and stuff like that. Have you thought about having a Suikoden style battle system with kingdom battles?
So far I like the game, a good mix of seriousness and humor (a lot of humor). I will say the english needs to be seriously cleaned up, I saw it will be address in the future when/if there is a budget increase. I both like and hate the camera moving during combat to focus on the target, it makes the combat feel a bit more dynamic but it also makes my eyes hurt when the camera shifts to a friendly unit cause it shakes/vibrates. That being said I still say to give the game at least a couple hours of your time to check out and maybe help Keanove get a bigger budget :).
P.S. I am basically a stay at home husband and would be willing to give cleaning up the english text a try if you are willing.
Thank you so much, many critiques and nice suggestions come to me include the one from you. So in my plan for next update basically I already made many changes of it, like shorten the dialogue, add skip on prologue, turn off that battle camera movement ,etc (Actually also a bit dizzy when try it myself ~lol)...
But yeah regarding the english, because I'm not native english speaker, I still have some problem with it ^^' And sadly because my project is free I don't have a budget to hire helper T^T (That's why, now I'm focusing on freelance jobs and decide to pending the update, but as a result I got sick and the update pending longer haha...)
Must say that artwork and story is lovely but i can clearly see that english isn't your first language and i thought reading it could give me stroke. so one of the most important things is to have someone to correct your mistakes. By now i only played till the world map to check out the menu and be able to save because near half an hour intro is in my opinion pretty long. I checked out the menu and you did very good job with how it feels. I'm looking forward to play more of it and hopes it'll become more popular. Good luck
Thank you for your honest opinion, and yeah I'm not a native english speaker. And because I'm soloing this and in low budget I still can't hire to help me fix the text. But I realized there some strange in my writing so in next update I'll try to shorten the text to reduce the time consuming and also to make sure everyone will understand at least. 😅
yup just wanted to say the intro was suuuuuuuper long, I liked it so far but man man just clicking Z to read for that long was tough, I wanted to start doing things within the first 10 minutes at most. Also not being able to save midway through the intro was killer. Even if it's little things like walking down the stairs or following the princess or guards etc, you should allow the player to move themselves. Also recommend putting little hidden secrets in the world map. https://www.grammarly.com/grammar-check this would be a good tool to use if you want to check your spelling/grammar.
Thank you so much and yeah for that matter I already made so much changes, and one of them is add skip for the intro ^^. For the secret I already prepare that, like there will be secret missions in a secret places or something. But making moveable during certain scene also nice suggestion and I'll consider it.
Also thank you for the grammar correction suggestion that will really help me alot >.<
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Wow! I liked this game and I also liked Izzar's sexy look! <3 (He might as well wear this sexy outfit for the rest of the game! Pleeease!!)
But I also liked the girls! Mainly Rica and Stevi who showed to have a good friendship!
The ero scene with Stevi was hot! <3
From your patreon page, I assume the game is going to be 100% straight for both sides, right? Like, Izzar won't fuck any guys and neither will girls have sex with each other...
I liked this game and I will definitely wait for the next update!
I have a suggestion since you want to do kingdom building and stuff like that. Have you thought about having a Suikoden style battle system with kingdom battles?
So far I like the game, a good mix of seriousness and humor (a lot of humor). I will say the english needs to be seriously cleaned up, I saw it will be address in the future when/if there is a budget increase. I both like and hate the camera moving during combat to focus on the target, it makes the combat feel a bit more dynamic but it also makes my eyes hurt when the camera shifts to a friendly unit cause it shakes/vibrates. That being said I still say to give the game at least a couple hours of your time to check out and maybe help Keanove get a bigger budget :).
P.S. I am basically a stay at home husband and would be willing to give cleaning up the english text a try if you are willing.
Thank you so much, many critiques and nice suggestions come to me include the one from you. So in my plan for next update basically I already made many changes of it, like shorten the dialogue, add skip on prologue, turn off that battle camera movement ,etc (Actually also a bit dizzy when try it myself ~lol)...
But yeah regarding the english, because I'm not native english speaker, I still have some problem with it ^^' And sadly because my project is free I don't have a budget to hire helper T^T (That's why, now I'm focusing on freelance jobs and decide to pending the update, but as a result I got sick and the update pending longer haha...)
No worries! Gotta take take of your health you know. I am looking forward to the next update when it comes!
Thank you and yeah I hope I can release the update soon ^^
This game looks pretty cool for now, i cant wait for future updates, good luck <3
Thank you so much~
Must say that artwork and story is lovely but i can clearly see that english isn't your first language and i thought reading it could give me stroke. so one of the most important things is to have someone to correct your mistakes. By now i only played till the world map to check out the menu and be able to save because near half an hour intro is in my opinion pretty long. I checked out the menu and you did very good job with how it feels. I'm looking forward to play more of it and hopes it'll become more popular. Good luck
Thank you for your honest opinion, and yeah I'm not a native english speaker. And because I'm soloing this and in low budget I still can't hire to help me fix the text. But I realized there some strange in my writing so in next update I'll try to shorten the text to reduce the time consuming and also to make sure everyone will understand at least. 😅
yup just wanted to say the intro was suuuuuuuper long, I liked it so far but man man just clicking Z to read for that long was tough, I wanted to start doing things within the first 10 minutes at most. Also not being able to save midway through the intro was killer. Even if it's little things like walking down the stairs or following the princess or guards etc, you should allow the player to move themselves. Also recommend putting little hidden secrets in the world map. https://www.grammarly.com/grammar-check this would be a good tool to use if you want to check your spelling/grammar.
Thank you so much and yeah for that matter I already made so much changes, and one of them is add skip for the intro ^^. For the secret I already prepare that, like there will be secret missions in a secret places or something. But making moveable during certain scene also nice suggestion and I'll consider it.
Also thank you for the grammar correction suggestion that will really help me alot >.<
Looks great and loved the kingdom building aspect of the game with my my favorite genre of RPG. Keep up the good work 👍
Thank you so much 😍, I kinda got inspired from suikoden for the kingdom building, not much resources gathering but still interesting.